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[Silverhammer]

i wrote this sunday and recorded a decent version yesterday. i'm not too satisfied with the second vocals...

well, if you like acoustic have a listen. i'm not technical with it at all. lyrics are more my thing :/

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=474268&content=music

thanks in advance

[Happy_Squirrel]

Great song. I love the melodies and the lyrics are pretty damn good. Recording is o.k. for a rough demo, but it sounded rather timid: like you were holding back (on both the vocal & guitar). Of course, I'm sure you want it to have kind of a soft, mellow feel, but you might try recording it with a slightly louder dynamic just to see what happens.

[einzweiveirfunf]

Bit too much fuzz, but for the most part, you got a nice guitar riff. Your vocals are perhaps a bit weak, but they gotta nice sound to them. Nice chord riff. In some ways though, i can't help but feel that it sounds a bit like one of those pretensious acoustic songs you get on a moblie phone advert. It's obvious that you put a lot into this however, and i respect that you have managed to write a good song. Though i complained about the fuzz, i must admit it did sorta add to the authenticity of this song.

if you ever feel like listening to some of my stuff: http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=544551