bringing it all back home

[r1mbaud]

dont not comment

[dawija3]

i didnt know you were such a good writer

[slack]

i have no idea what these lyrics are about and they do not intrigue me enough to want to sit here and decipher them.

[Surf]

^that

You're more concerned with making words sound like other words than explaining what you're trying to say. The first two lines are a calamity.

Forcing the rhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyymmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee basically

[r1mbaud]

this is really old... soo uhmm, read newer ones. i put some up that i had here from not too long ago that received no comments. so, just dont comment this one especially when someone else has said something you supposedly completely agree with and add nothing to while on pieces i care nothing about (this one and bits and pieces). be constructive, eh?

[slack]

uhm, heres an idea

dont post songs here that you "care nothing about"

and

dont expect constructive criticism on work you "care nothing about"

[r1mbaud]

this is a year old. i wanted constructive criticism. A YEAR AGO. great idea though. maybe instead of trying to be witty you can critique a recently posted piece.

[Surf]

tbh I never check the dates on a post when I click the thread. I just assumed this was recent.

So... meh I don't really care

[slack]

eh i dont check dates either

**** me

[r1mbaud]

its okay i love you both please check my very newest one. :D

[dawija3]

i hate how on forums theres always that one dude whos feeling rebellious and decides his little "i think this poem is garbage so im just gonna tell everyone how much i 'dont care enough' to write anything important just so i get noticed" thinks that what he says means anything to anyone else.

**** man, constructive cristism is all you need to say on these threads. positive feedback before negative. lets think before we come off as a douche bag.