shnoogumz
09-17-2007, 08:45 PM
I originally wrote this song in French, so not everything flows properly/fits together 100%, but feedback on the general idea/theme of the song would be appreciated
The house I live in
Is not where I reside
And the walls in the house
Close around me
And I cannot escape
Because my legs are made of lead
The only one who knows all the words in the dictionary
Is the only one who dies a horrible death
And I raise my arms in the air
Because this is the greatest day that I've ever seen
You taste awful
But you smell much better
And I don't know who's making that noise
But I promis that I'll make it stop
And the mood in your bedroom is very troubling
But I don't pay any mind
The only one who knows all the words in the dictionary
Is the only one who dies a horrible death
And I raise my arms in the air
Because this is the greatest day that I've ever seen
Can you hear all the words of the children
They bawl because they're made of lead
Like me
Just like me
Can you hear what they're saying
A giant mixture of cries and chants
Like me
Oh just like me
The house I live in
Is not where I reside
And I cannot escape
Because my legs are made of lead
again, I know it doesn't all fit 100% but feedback is always appreciated :)
The house I live in
Is not where I reside
And the walls in the house
Close around me
And I cannot escape
Because my legs are made of lead
The only one who knows all the words in the dictionary
Is the only one who dies a horrible death
And I raise my arms in the air
Because this is the greatest day that I've ever seen
You taste awful
But you smell much better
And I don't know who's making that noise
But I promis that I'll make it stop
And the mood in your bedroom is very troubling
But I don't pay any mind
The only one who knows all the words in the dictionary
Is the only one who dies a horrible death
And I raise my arms in the air
Because this is the greatest day that I've ever seen
Can you hear all the words of the children
They bawl because they're made of lead
Like me
Just like me
Can you hear what they're saying
A giant mixture of cries and chants
Like me
Oh just like me
The house I live in
Is not where I reside
And I cannot escape
Because my legs are made of lead
again, I know it doesn't all fit 100% but feedback is always appreciated :)