Bits and pieces of feelings

[r1mbaud]

dont comment

[DeadReligion]

A more centered message would do this good. I like the form of it, though, except when you rhymed passion with itself.

[dawija3]

if he changed the 2nd passion to another word that rhymed with passion it wouldnt make sense because thats not what hes talking about, he did it for a reason bud

[Powerban]

It still doesn't mean it looks right. There is no reason you can't change that bit all together and still portray the same message.

I kinda like the rest though

[r1mbaud]

this is a year old, and quite frankly i hate it all :D but thanks for the advice /support.

[keyboardxmosh]

lol why the **** was this bumped?

[schiggy]

probably bc the user above you bumped it.

[r1mbaud]

lol why the **** was this bumped?
hypocrite:rolleyes: