Rate My Music (Blue Velvet Mask)

[Meatplow]

http://www.myspace.com/bluevelvetmask

A few songs i have written over the time (with the last one an obvious cover). Production is horrible and i can't sing :smash:, however i'm looking for advice on how i've structured the songs musically, songwriting and what can be improved etc. I've gone for a kind of Ween feel with genre, minus the talent perhaps. I am working on it i swear!

[Silverhammer]

one song reminded me of beck. but overall you would probably do better live because some songs sound like you're restraining yourself for the mic or for limited space. if you were live you would be able to yell without caution, which, to me, seems like you want to do, and it would definitely sound appropriate. didn't really care for the second song, it did sound funny though.

[Meatplow]

Thanks. :)

I have a really horrible mic which pops and clicks all the time and has a cord extension of about 30 centimeters plugged into the back of my computer so i'm pretty much squashed up next to the monitor trying to concentrate on holding the mic in a way that prevents it from clicking so much. It's very restraining indeed.