Love-sick vampire

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This is a song written from the perspective of a vampire who lost his love to mortality centuries before and is now still coping with his loss. The track itself is not entirely finished, some things are a little to high, some are a little too low. Let me know what you think of the song itself. I always need criticism of the vocals. Thanks.

http://media.putfile.com/Lovesick-Vampire

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