New Song! ( very chill , with ambient touch)

[BassAddict04]

New song! woo! haha.

Its called 'pondering the souls weakness'

let me know what you all think

http://www.myspace.com/maciejsbassismofbass

thanks

[HaVIC5]

Cool stuff. Criticisms:

It didn't seem to build, or develop melodically that much. Starting at about 1:12 it began to build to something and start to develop the texture, etc, but as soon as it was getting going, it stopped. Overall it seemed to stagnate a bit when after that section it just went right back to the beginning. Yeah, I know you were after the "chill" vibe, which is cool and all, but I felt you could have done more in the way of development.

I didn't really like the drum loop. Yeah, you were going for something sparse, but it really was detracting from the overall experience in my opinion.

Just some ideas to make it better. I enjoyed it, though, good bass playing. :thumb:

[naut]

i definitely like it...just a few things: i think the bass was a little too high in the mix (at the beginning), and there's something about the kick that keeps throwing me off...can't put my finger it. regardless, it's a cool tune.

[BassAddict04]

thanks thanks

[Thor_McDee]

dude that song is kik so dude keeep making more that was funky fresh and great so yep

[BassAddict04]

thanks man