Short instrumental, take a listen

[farmertanman91]

Hey everyone this is just a short instrumental that i wrote and recorded one day at my house, so listen to it and give me some feedback. Its the first one that appears on the player, called Delirium. Thanks!

http://www.myspace.com/ianharshman

[indietrashrock]

have you listened to Darkthrone's newest album? haha. there's summat about this that makes me think about it.

anyway. the shredding is pretty tight. the drums are perfectly mixed. not that perfectly played, but fairly decent. the rhythm guitar is pretty much as tight as the lead. but where this track fails imo is in the structure. it's too stale. very obvious what's gonna happen at all times. not original enough. I _did_ like it, just I feel you have a way to go on the progression.

but a decent song by all means. promising stuff.

[farmertanman91]

thanks for the props. yea i would have varied it a little more, unfortunately audacity crashed at about 11 that night along with half the stuff i had just done, and i had to have this done by the next morning. so i had to repeat some stuff alot more than i would have liked to

btw the drums were all done on fruity loops by me, theres no actual drummer lol

[indietrashrock]

wow. even more kudos on the mixing then. fruityloops tend to sound like ****. but this sounds pretty good.

[farmertanman91]

yea the drum settings they give you sound like crap, so i stole some drum samples from one of the sample songs and it sounds much better