Black Tar Lullaby

[trippedhimself]

The Leather hurts my old teeth
Rotted Wood beneath our feet
Help me bind my arm for now
I'm goin away, I'll see you around

Morning fog has got me down
Help me suffocate the sounds
Time to feel like a man
And forget about this town

Desert highways find me gone
Stuck a sword inside my arm
Take a drink, grab your kiss
My vein is out on your lips

Littered on dawn's highway
There's no way out of here today
I'll die in my sleep tongiht
As I died I felt alive

yah wrote this on a creative spur. crits are appreciated

[flywithdiamonds]

Looks like we could have a young Bon Jovi on our hands (meant in a good way). Had a bouncy fast pace to it but I'll be honest it felt a little bland and lacking in content and I have no idea what the last stanza was trying to say. However I could say the same for most of Bon Jovi's work and that's influenced millions so keep at it.