something new

[zer0gauge]

searching for a new dream
this one's grey and worn
a semblance in monochrome
that slowly drifts away
just out of reach

give me a new life
without the wasted time
on memories of fantasies
and missing what wouldn't be
said to fake the pain

tell me a new lie
so that your voice rings true
like a child's first morning
finding light in every sight
peace lost with time

[Seeders]

:amaze:

perfect.

[iam2000pounds]

That was really good.

[ChristophTBM]

Very good! Can't pick out any faults! Can't even pick out a line I like because I like it all :)

[CofDdrums12]

With lyrics like that, I can only hope you have the musical/vocal talent to do it justice were it to be recorded.

Es muy bueno.

[zer0gauge]

With lyrics like that, I can only hope you have the musical/vocal talent to do it justice were it to be recorded.

Es muy bueno.

well, we'll find out. I'm going to work on getting a rough recording down in the next couple weeks, provided I have time.