Blind. (/w rec)

[poo-poo-pee-pee]

Old song, revised. Acoustic version can be found at:

http://www.myspace.com/sweetdecemberband

Let me know what you think of the lyrics, and/or the song as a whole. :)

Blind.

I wish I could fly like you do,
I wish I could fly like you said that I would
I wish I could close my eyes,
and everything would be okay.

Chorus.
But I can't deceive myself;
No matter how hard I try.
I can't keep my eyes shut,
And I don't know why,
And even if I could,
Would everything be okay,
Or would I just go blind?

Hold your hands closer and maybe,
you'll feel me cease to breath.
I'm giving up on myself,
and you're giving up on me.
These tired eyes beyond belief,
not old enough to see.
I wish I could close my eyes,
and everything would be redeemed.

Chorus.

I wont wake up from this dream,
I wont even close my eyes.
(I) wont wake up from this sleep,
I wont even close my eyes.

Chorus.

Or would I just go blind?

Thanks for reading/listening. :thumb:

[poo-poo-pee-pee]

Bump :)

[poo-poo-pee-pee]

...Bump?

[Kage]

The acoustic playing isn't too bad, but you are an awful singer. Just terrible. It's embarrassingly bad.

And the lyrics are extremely cliche. Not a single thing interesting about them, or the song really. The melody is a heard-it-a-million times before travesty, and my GOD...this singing is so bad.

[poo-poo-pee-pee]

yeah, I don't consider myself a singer, haha.
We just have fun.

[KaNeYCaNeS]

Kage why would you bother writing that, your opinion is **** and i would like to see you do better, keep f****** opinions like that to yourself.
I liked it, well writen good music, singing not the best but adequate

[Surf]

No Kage is right

And he's posted things that are better

So stop bumping your friend's threads