new video origional thing

[ludwig109]

just wantin some feedback on this, CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK not ooo thats **** etc.

see what you think
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7l2CyRbPP_Q

and yes i know its sloppy as **** and the tempo changes badly but meh just rough

[funkyhoney]

that was sick!!!

you've got some decent chops man, i actually really enjoy it, i can see it going far with some more instrumentation, hell even by itself is great!

[ludwig109]

cheers yeh me and a friend are workin on it, theres guitar to it prettymuch set down but no drums so far, ive had it floatin around for a year or more since i got my six string prettymuch the first thing i made up on it.

[funkyhoney]

i like the slap bit, i can imagine some sick drums going with that, nothing too heavy though.

[Pnut]

Dude that was really good man. I didn't think it was sloppy at all,excelent job :thumb:

[ludwig109]

ah cheers so umm i just know ive done it better is all so meh, ill get a version up with the guitarist aswell at some point once its worked out in full.

[naut]

yeah all i can really say is clean it up a bit, but you already acknowledged that. otherwise, i thought it was pretty cool.

[ludwig109]

yeh cheers naut, ill probably get a better version up at some point, but it was 2am i had nothin better to do and was bored so mightaswell:P.

[Bigga]

that was good :thumb:

keep it going man i liked the tapping.

[d-basser]

nothing really to add, thought it sounded great but as you say a little bit$ sloppy in places, very very little bit, nothing horrendous though. I would add i felt the higher tapping notes lacked a little, maybe work on them sounding a little bit more or use a mild compressor. just my thoughts thought, it totally owns any of my playing

[Peterwgw]

thats was pretty cool, alot better than what i could do

[funkyhoney]

@ d-basser nice avatar :p

but seriously dude, it's great, just work on getting some good drums :thumb:

[d-basser]

aahh the moon, wen the sun go by, i lick his back :P

[Omega Red]

metronome

[:amaze:]

would be a good bassline for a full band song, seemed kinda empty as-is, but like you said you're working on it with a guitarist ... get that clip up soon.



:amaze:

[EADG]

metronome


Yeah that and your style is really aggressive, personally I would turn up and play lighter, but if that's what you're going for then nevermind.


Other than that it sounds great

[ludwig109]

thanks yeh i am a bit agressive but it was recorded on a webcam soundwise so i think that doesnt help either picking up all the clacks and such, and it was abbout 2am so i couldnt really turn up too much but ya