Opinions please

[deemo]

Hi, wrote this song recently. No singing or lyrics to it, since I'm not the greatest at singing or writing lyrics. How does she sound? www.purevolume.com/caveman.

[PECOAE]

Wrong forum for songs, this is the lyrics forum.

I got confused once too because it says "songwriting", but go to the Audio Arena for this.

[TojesDolan]

Let me move this for you.