Two new songs that i would like you to critique

[IamaRadiohead]

They didn't come out of the mixing process as well as i would have liked so i will probably re-do them later.

Otherwise i would love to hear what you think of them. Please be honest. I really do want to hear how I can make them better

I play kind of an Alternative/Acoustic/Folk type of music if you were wondering

The new ones are called: "No name" and "Tired" and can be found on soundclick.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pageartist.cfm?bandID=602364

Please listen to the old songs as well and if you like my stuff you can add me on myspace.

http://www.myspace.com/alancorbinmusic

I will crit your stuff as well if you'd like

Thanks a lot.

-Alan

[indietrash]

the soundclick link is bad.
but I'll give you my two cents concerning the three songs on MySpace.

No Name
niiice work with the guitar. I really like your accent and voice. a bit nasal, but just enough for it too work. I like the uhm... violins? nice track.

The Truth About You
the acoustic guitar is simplistic, but effective. the electric guitar makes great company. the vocals fit the atmosphere. the lyrics are entertaining and good. the song itself is entertaining and good.

The Way That He Lives
I love the riffs you use on this track. wonderful vocals, as always. the drums are very cool. they keep the melody flowing. this is the best track imo.


all in all - you're very good. heaps of potential. I'd probably buy an album.

[IamaRadiohead]

Ah thanks a lot for the kind words. i really appreciate it.

I fixed the soundclick link also so you can check that out now.

Also both of the new songs are on myspace too now.

-Alan

[indietrash]

haha. Tired is amazing, man. this is damn near genius. so classy. so uplifting. so fantastic. this is just... I'm at loss of words. I'm actually turning off my The Art of Drowning CD, and putting this on repeat.
I love this. simply wonderful. you should release a EP, or send me a CD-R. asap! lol. awesome stuff.

[La Revolucion]

Not bad. Just make sure you don't sound too much like your influences, especially Fionn and Elliot Smith. I hear a lot of them, and not much of an individual sound that you have to make. Work on adding something of your own, and I'm sure this will be fantastic.

[IamaRadiohead]

Thanks La Revolucion.

I'm still trying to find that something to add to my music to make it mine. Hopefully I'll find it soon.

[The_shotgun_message]

Man your stuff is very good, very professional sounding, makes me think of sitting on a bus when its raining or sumthing haha, but ye im impressed, well done!

[The_shotgun_message]

I really like tired alot

[The_shotgun_message]

Still really enjoying your stuff man( i downloaded tired and no name and listen to them on itunes)

hoping for more songs.

[IamaRadiohead]

Thanks a lot TSM.

I'm really glad you like them.

I should have a new song up soon, probably by the end of the week.

-Alan