RATM Like Song

[Ratmlz]

here is a song i record,just guitar,poor poor quailty,drums will be in sooner or later

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=2847A61C1D238505

[indietrash]

well. this wasn't as bad as I had expected. to tell the truth - I'd expected some Morello-esque pointless guitar wanking. and instead I got actual patterns, and nice chord progression.
I can't really say all that much without hearing it with drums, as I am quite sure it'll sound heaps better with drums.

so. clean it up. get it more tight. add the drums... and we'll see:chug:

[TravisBarkerrules]

good lord, I dont even know what to say. Its just suchn a terrible recording, idk what to tell you about the actual song.

[Crowley5150]

Did I just wake up in another parallel universe?

Its 9am friday morning, and im trying to work out what the hell it is im listening to. I kinda remember hearing something like it once before but I can't quite put my finger on it..... oh yeah thats right, a couple of years ago I dropped my guitar on a concrete slab from 2 storeys up and then I played it.

But seriously.... I don't hear any sort of structure here (im not the best person to compare things with RATM because I think Morello RATM is one of, if not THE worst guitaring i've ever heard).... but it just doesn't seem to have any body or any direction. It sounds very dischord, very scattered and not making any sense musically.

[Ratmlz]

Crowley is an ***,and anyway

here is the final guitar part for it much cleaner


its called Nameless

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=142758994

[Crowley5150]

Yeah I am lots of *'s... #'s and &'s too.... but ive been called worse. Water off a ducks back.

Though the first part of my post was an incessant sarcastic ramble... the last part I wrote with honesty. I'd like to hear the new track but it tells me I need to log in and be a member to listen....

[Ratmlz]

yo its called nameless on that myspace link

[Crowley5150]

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This user has either cancelled their membership, or their acccount has been deleted.

[Ratmlz]

thats strange....

if this doesnt work i will shoot myself

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=899B99A067FC8C15

[Crowley5150]

Got it this time - actually.... I cant say I hear any resembelance to RATM in there but I got this Tony Iomii feel in there... kinda mid era (later Ozzy years) Sabbath in the main riff.

Not a bad riff actually.... not sure about the whole middle section as to its purpose, but its not a bad effort overall.... needs some tighter timing and performance, but its not a bad effort.

[Ratmlz]

thanks dude,and uh that middle part will make more sense with drums

[Yield]

I can see where your going at with the RATM reference. It's okay.

[mx Bass player]

people obviously dont no fu k all if they think tom morellos ****........obviously jelous like to see u fags do betta

[Crowley5150]

must.............. not................ type................ be................. strong................. don't ................... call.................... this ............. pric^H^H^Herson......... any........... names.

[indietrash]

you know, for being such a prick - you ain't too bad a guitarplayer. but some of this sounds pretty random. and you need to tighten it.
but not bad. especially considering you being such a dick.

EDIT: haha. I thought it was you (Ratmlz) who posted that crap mx Bass player posted.
sorry. you're no prick. or dick. just a pretty good guitar player.

[Crowley5150]

Doncha hate it when you type stuff like that then you realise its past the time you can delete it? :)