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sonofsam
04-03-2007, 06:54 PM
just finished this track. Let me know what you think :chug:
it's called "love"
http://www.myspace.com/thecashiers
indietrash
04-03-2007, 09:06 PM
Son of Sam (the band, not the psycho) rules.
unfortunately - this song, "Love", does not rule. in my ears - it's not very good at all.
the vocals are incredibly annoying. I can't describe how the "na nanananana" part makes me feel. and that's not meant in a positive way.
neither the percussion or stringed action taking place on this track blows me away. in fact - it makes me wanna turn the song off.
all in all - I'd say this was awful. not my thing at all. but best of luck to you, anyway. some people obviously like this.
sonofsam
04-03-2007, 09:45 PM
Everyone's entitled to their opinion :)
Dave Cardwell
04-03-2007, 09:52 PM
Nice singing, you have a powerful voice. The songwriting is interesting too. The guitar sounds really harsh though, I would cut some high mids.
sonofsam
04-03-2007, 10:07 PM
Nice singing, you have a powerful voice. The songwriting is interesting too. The guitar sounds really harsh though, I would cut some high mids.
Thanks, that's actually my gf singing :) i'll pass it on though.
thanks for the input, i'll try cutting the high-mids :chug:
spongebath01
04-03-2007, 10:12 PM
Not too bad. I'm an artist in Houston as well. It's always cool to find other artist from Houston. My advice on the song is that it has potential and the singer has a good voice, however, the vocal melody is too meandering and complex. As a result, the song is not as catchy or accesible as it could be. I'd try to keep this in mind when further writing songs.
P.S. I just added you on myspace. My name is Zach Goldman.
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