original metal song

[lawlstorm]

vocals aren't done yet (still waiting till i have an empty house lol)

please offer some constructive criticism. especially when it comes to mixing and **** as i really have no ****ing clue what I'm doing in that respect.
I tried posting it in the guitar forum but no one responded so all comments are appreciated.
all instruments (guitar/bass) me. except drums are from acoustica beatcraft

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=677492

http://www.yousendit.com/download/T2dkM25OWkJsamMwTVE9PQ

[Thasis]

The recording is half-decent. The song is kinnda generic sounding, but it's alright. Realy, I'm not going to make a full out judgement until the vox are in, but it sounds good, but it could be wayyyy better. Keep working and trying though XD