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forever_favored
03-12-2007, 06:52 PM
i just wrote this today and i like it a lot but...idk about the hook line...if you can come up with something better, tell me!!!

i could stop loving if i wanted to
it just so happenns that that's not what i choose to do
oh, i could let go
i could let you go
but what then would i do?
for then i'd only be blue

i could stop missin you, not like it's hard to do
it's just that right now it's not something that i have to do
i could walk away
oh, so far away
but who would i walk off to
oh, then i'd only be blue

i can make it so the sun doesn't rise and set with your voice
i can leave you here, believe, it's my choice
i know that my life'd go on without your beck and call
but i choose not to
cause then i'd only
oh, then i'd only
o then i'd only be blue

so tell me what u think, i'm gettin crunched for time, i'm supposed to record this summer, it'd be super helpful to get ur advice and criticism, crit 4 crit, promise!

GibsonSGPlayer
03-15-2007, 10:29 PM
i thought it was a great song...just needs to be longer...nice job :thumb: