mood_swing_queen
03-11-2007, 10:11 PM
This is a new song I've been working on critique it please
thank you
"The Kink In The Soul Of Me"
Verse I
I'll surprise you with two tickets to the dance
Blue daises and a little chance
Break
Verse II
It's a three week no obligation trial
If you don't like just give it a while
No matter what the hand just let the cards fall
All in all you'll still have less than it all
Break
Verse III
After three cigarettes I count my thoughts
You barely knew me, but you knew what you caught
Chorus x3
There's a kink in the soul of me
There's a lot to be said, but you know what you see
There's no more rain upon St. Ides
There's only blue and I'm drowning in your eyes
thank you
"The Kink In The Soul Of Me"
Verse I
I'll surprise you with two tickets to the dance
Blue daises and a little chance
Break
Verse II
It's a three week no obligation trial
If you don't like just give it a while
No matter what the hand just let the cards fall
All in all you'll still have less than it all
Break
Verse III
After three cigarettes I count my thoughts
You barely knew me, but you knew what you caught
Chorus x3
There's a kink in the soul of me
There's a lot to be said, but you know what you see
There's no more rain upon St. Ides
There's only blue and I'm drowning in your eyes