audio.

[Mirror.Circuit]

some new jamming audio of me and my friend and out band..thing.
www.myspace.com/amyofmonument
listen to "red"

[Mirror.Circuit]

no one's got anything to say?
not even some constructive criticism?

[TravisBarkerrules]

Dude didnt you get like bored as hell? there is like no consistance i would shoot myself.
Need more Refused in there.

[Mirror.Circuit]

wait,what?
If it's not consistent,then that would imply that almost nothing is the same...
It was just a jam,anyways.

[TravisBarkerrules]

Dude, Im not putn you down in any way, its just with a guitar riff like that its really hard to have like a solid drum thing going in the back. Like a consistant drum beat is what i ment. Sorry I didnt make myself clear.

[Mirror.Circuit]

well,as far as I could tell when we were jamming I did alright.
Minus the beginning "ambient/trance" part where he goes into cut time,albeit very sloppily.
I guess i'm still not getting what you're saying.

[poopoogaypoonn]

"Red" at some point sounds like Sigur Ros...the song they did for Vinallia SKy
And you like meandhimcallitus?
They play ata local club like every month which i live like 5 ft from

[Mirror.Circuit]

ah,"Song 5" is the song they did for Vanilla Sky.
We both like Sigur Ros,so I guess that might fit a little.
And yeah,we both like me and him call it us too.

[TravisBarkerrules]

I dont know what im talking about either...Just dont mind me I dont know.

[Mirror.Circuit]

haha.
Well,did you at least find it mildly enjoyable?

[TravisBarkerrules]

Yeah, im going to listen again maybe ill make sense this time.
Ok, well last time I did not get far enough into to hear you actually start playing in unison. When you start playn and the guitarist is going chords. Early on it just was missing some to me but good jam probably a lot you can us out of it.

[Mirror.Circuit]

yeah,the beginning "ambient" stuff isn't something my friend plays a lot.
so he's not too good at fleshing it out yet.
that and the record blows.
thanks for the feedback man.
+rep

[Mirror.Circuit]

bump.

somebody else please listen?

[dairyairman]

ok. i don't have a problem with the trippy stuff, and i like what you're playing, but it goes on too long imo. i think you should keep that random section to under a minute, then taper off until it's very quiet, then blast in with a heavy, hard hitting beat. do you see what i mean? the random section builds tension. if you follow that with a heavy beat and wide open guitar playing that would release the tension.

[Mirror.Circuit]

yeah,i'd agree.
but like i said,it's a jam,and i have to follow my guitarist more.
but thanks for the comments man.