Please Crit My Recording

[Seamstander]

Hi guys. I'm just looking for some feedback for a little ditty I was running with this morning. Tell me what you think. Its very much in the rock/alternative vein.

http://www.brainerd.net/~scotydog/LookingInwards.mp3

Thanks.

[reggaejunkie001]

Good song, I enjoyed it. I just hope you have some lyrics in mind.
Maybe make the bass line a bit more eventful(more runs or groove) for the guitar pauses? Just a suggestion.

[10571z]

Pretty Cool effects at the start. What did you use to that. And i like the song.

[Seamstander]

Thanks for the listens friends.

The effect at the beginning is reverse delay and a Random S&H.

[10571z]

Whats your band called and stuff?

[cadencethefire]

nice job, how'd you do the bass all sexy like that eh?

EDIT:

i'd bring the guitars down in the chorus a tiny tiny bit and maybe cut more of their low end but not much, this recording is near perfection

[peaveyrules]

I really liked it. What equipment did you record this with?