echolalia

[mastrrbasser]

Hey i'm over from the bass forums :wave:, and this is my first crack at writing lyrics.

there isn't a set format yet, but i would love some feedback:

I'm in a hall of fun-house mirrors
Searching for the reflection,
of your acrid melodies
Not the carbon copies:
hidden echolalia

Chorus:
I want to tear them apart
(so i can sleep again)
smash them to pieces
(until they splinter my hands)

If i can only find the
archetype of your message
i would destroy it
and leave no trace

The glorious cacophony
rips through me
like glass through gossamer
and leaves shreds of me
on the ground to
collect dust

I hope to kill your sound
but it only grows louder

not the most uplifting song, but the inspiration for it wasn't very good :lol: