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jb6oclock
12-29-2006, 11:38 PM
TO JONAH FROM HERE


Do you ever think about it?
Does it make you cry?

Do you ever sit and wonder?
Do you wonder why?





Instr. break.........................

Do you ever talk about it?
Do they even care?

Do they listen with great attention?
or do they just stare?


I want you to know everything
before you turn and walk away


Instr. break............................


Do I ever think about it?
it's always on my mind
I try not to talk aboout it
it always makes me cry.

I need to know everything
before you turn and walk away


brdg.

We need to know everything
before we walk away
it's an open book of suggestion
don't walk away..

TojesDolan
12-29-2006, 11:54 PM
No need to talk about the instrumental breakdowns. Otherwise it's a little bit dumb, in the sense it has no real catch to it, considering it'd be a pop song.

DeadReligion
12-30-2006, 10:43 PM
Welcome back. I sort of remember you. Too many questions here, no need to mark instrumental breakdowns. Not a whole lot of imagery or use of literary techniques here.