Nervosa

[Char Luz Monage]

I can't feel
Because it's all been overtaken
By my delusional dreams
I can't see
Everything is clouded
By my devotional beliefs
And I know
Today, there's no pretty diamonds for me
They've all been chased away
By the return of reality
Like a meteor
In an instant it destroys all that I've built for myself

Cuz I thought I found my way
But I don't know where to go from here
Amongst fleeting chances
Too quickly do they disappear

Will I fall, risk it all
To meet the frozen ground
Join the multitude of broken wings
Or will I fly, kiss the sky
To find there's nothing above it?
Afraid of fate, afraid of God
I trudge on

I stand between again
Looking up, at who I may become
All the while neglecting who I am and have been
Lost lonely in a cloud of anxiety and angst
Failure becoming the future's new face
Home never seemed further away
And I can't help but to reminisce
And wonder if I'll be lost forever?

Cuz I thought I found my way
But I dont know where to go from here
Amongst fleeting chances
Too quickly do they disappear

Will I fall, risk it all
To meet the frozen ground
Join the multitude of broken wings
Or will I fly, kiss the sky
To find there's nothing above it?
Afraid of fate, afraid of God
I trudge on

How can I fall, if I've never risen above the ground?
How can I lose, when I've had nothing?

Even if I one day see the road
Will I find it leads to nowhere?
What if I someday reach infinite
And find there's nothing beyond?
What if I soar to heaven
To find that theres no God?

And if nervosa kills me
For a beauty that is sparse
Will death be the end?
Will I subserve to rest?
Or will I wander on, a discontent silhouette?
Will the light at the end, and heaven not be enough?

Will I fall, risk it all
To meet the frozen ground
Join the multitude of broken wings
Or will I fly, kiss the sky
To find there's nothing above it?
Afraid of fate, afraid of God
I trudge on

And if I reach infinite's end, where will I go from there?


k guys.. i need serious intelligent crit. muchos gracias =D :smoke:

[Kidneylust]

i think their pretty good lyrics, i write lyrics but i can't sing and i can't really sync my stuff up w/ guitar....um how in some form would you sing this, like what kinda influences would you use?

[Surf]

First thing I thought of when I read the title was the cafe in Frasier.
But I did some research and it seems to be some sort of anorexia.
And there lies the problem. I had to google the title to find out what it was about: its so vague.
Apart from one verse (And if nervosa kills me/For a beauty that is sparse...) the song could realy have been about anything.
Try and be more specific without being too blunt. Look into using more interesting and specific metaphors, or images; check out the s&l guide for some help.

[Char Luz Monage]

influences.. um.. i cant really tell you how.

You just kind of have to flow with it, and follow your inspirations.

Thats all i can really say... you have to sync the lyrics with your guitar based on the feeling or mood you believe is portryed by the lyrics.. it just all depends on how you belive they should... feel