Organized Chaos

[sportsfan4427]

hey could you check out my band Organized Chaos and tell me what you think of our song

http://www.myspace.com/organized1chaos


some parts of it are weirdly mixed like the drums are a bit quiet

[sportsfan4427]

comments anyone...please?

[CantBuyAThrill]

Typing as I hear it:

The intro was cool, but lasted a bit long. That guitar sounds clean but almost cheesy clean. Mix is pretty good. Vocals aren't great, but not bad- pretty good actually on second listen. Not much of a melody, but it gets the job done. Repetitious rhythm guitar. Wish the chords had more drastic of a change. The chorus actually has some melody and pretty audible lyrics, even though they're kind of generic. Drums sound pretty good. I can't hear bass much on the speakers I have, so can't comment too much on kick or bass guitar. That harmony in the chorus is pretty good. Bass guitar sounds pretty good from what I can hear. Solo shows talent, but hitting the same note at the end of the first two phrases is not a good thing, as is how it came out of the song. Not too smooth of a transition. I wish it was more of an "every note counts solo" than a "too many notes to count" solo. Ending was pretty good.

I'm really nitpicking with this one, but I'm trying to give you as much stuff as I can so that you can improve from it.

Really good job. I wish you had a better name, though. First impression is really important, and that name almost scared me off from listening.

[sportsfan4427]

thanks Can't Buy A Thrill for the comments i agree our guitarist totally shreds like that in every song and i do wish he would slow down and make his solos a bit more melodic
also we're looking to change our name, probably, cause Organized Chaos has a bit of a metal feel

[sportsfan4427]

anyone else

[cadencethefire]

i'd say you guys need to work on songwriting before you get back to recording. work out the basic ideas as the band, but the singer has to have a lot of input on the song if you want the vocal lines to be catchy and upfront... right now all i hear the vocals doing is sitting back with the rest of the music and it leaves me waiting for something to come in on top of it and make it all better :)

anyways, it never hurts to revamp a song with good ideas, its what makes a good song great