hey, this is my newest song

[perriwinkle]

http://members.cox.net/nickingv/3===D.mp3

thank you for listening

[perriwinkle]

i take that back

i thank no one




yet................

[Hadji]

That was sweet as hell. It felt like it started out somewhere in Hyrule. As the song progreessed you were taken into a city which then turned into a ****ed up dream world. And as you awoke it was a city again. Sweet.

[class]

I like most of your stuff periwinkle (my aka is False Advertising if you remember me), but for some reason I couldn't get into this as much for some reason. Nonetheless it was executed well. You should get on AIM again and you could review my stuff and i yours...if not that's fine..

[BringHomeTheBacon]

This song is pretty sweet. I like this post-rock meets Aphex Twin sound you've got going. Keep up the good work

[perriwinkle]

okay now i thank everyone for the comments and support. and i like the "aphex twin meets post rock" comment; that sounds like it would be a cool combination and i think that's awesome that the song came off that way.

and to the first responder, i like the narrative you gave, so i think i'll try putting some ambience behind the track at parts to emphasize that progression you described, so thanks :)


I like most of your stuff periwinkle (my aka is False Advertising if you remember me), but for some reason I couldn't get into this as much for some reason. Nonetheless it was executed well. You should get on AIM again and you could review my stuff and i yours...if not that's fine..

yo feel free man, any time you see me on aim you can talk to me or send me music or whatever you want, if you dont still have it my screen name is ishkabum

im working on some stuff with the song now so i'll post a newer version in a little bit

[Swill_Merchant]

I like all of it. It was very acid-trip like, and I can appriciate how hard that **** is to make (i tried many times to fail and come out empty-handed). The only thing that bugged me was that there were a lot of themes that were on total different wave-length than the others. If you are aiming for through-writing though, you are did it really ****ing good here. The only advice I can fathome to give would to ease into themes more carefully.

[perriwinkle]

I like all of it. It was very acid-trip like, and I can appriciate how hard that **** is to make (i tried many times to fail and come out empty-handed). The only thing that bugged me was that there were a lot of themes that were on total different wave-length than the others. If you are aiming for through-writing though, you are did it really ****ing good here. The only advice I can fathome to give would to ease into themes more carefully.

thanks a ton for all of your honest opinons and compliments. it takes a while to learn how to do stuff with acid and thats why i try to use guitar and keyboard while i can haha thats what i used for the melodies, then i messed with them in acid to make the synths and pads and such in the song. the songs do progress very quickly but if the way they do that seems fluid to you then i've achieved what i set out for because i like bands with very dynamic and often short songs (i.e. Thingy, Heavy Vegetable) so i draw from that at times




if anybody is interested here is my myspace
http://www.myspace.com/wangmastaflex