First Recording. Looking for some contructive crit.

[shishin]

I just finished my first song with a friend of mine. We're looking for some pointers on how to make the mix or the song better. Thanks.

purevolume.com/doctorbeak

I'll post a version with vocals later.

[deadautomatic]

Not much gets reviewed around here does it?

I liked the guitar riff for the verses, it's very catchy. I also liked the end where the piano kicks in. Overall I think this song may be relying on a good vocalist to kick it up to the next level. You had some very interesting changes in the song but they didn't make me go, whoa I didn't expect that. You know what I mean? If I had to make suggestions to you I'd say if you like the overall structure of the song and the way it moves then refine some of the riffs you already have in the song. For me they just kind of float along because with the exception of the verse nothing really catches my ear.

Good luck bro and Im looking forward to hearing it again when you post the song with vocals.

[shishin]

Thanks for the review. I'll make some changes and post it with vocals and hopefully it'll sound better.