The Ramones Parody - Sheena is a Punk Rocker/Julia is a Bounty Hunter c4c

[ygokazuki]

Here's a parody of one of my favorite Ramones songs!
I'm not much of a singer, but those harmonies were really fun to record, lol.
Criticism is appreciated and will be returned.
Thanks!
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[benjhannah]

Firstly- there are some things you just shouldn't touch. Unfortunately I've touched a few tracks that I shouldn't have so I can't be a hypocrite.

Secondly- Where is this track???

Thirdly- Had a listen to your other tracks and one suggest you don't pitch correct the vox- it sounds naff and you really can't fool anyone- If you don't get it right first time just do it again. Pitch correction to me seems a lazy way of production- I'm not the greatest singer but I'll keep going until I hit the right notes.

I'll have a listen to the parady when you get the chance to put it up!

Also I'd take that Whale Solo off if I were you- Keep it for yourself- It's probably funny to you but it's just going to put people off the rest of your music!

Hope I haven't been too harsh on you but when I started I really valued honest opinions and I think it's made me into a better musician as a whole!

Keep on pluggin!

BenJ

[ygokazuki]

Secondly- Where is this track???It's up here now: www.freewebs.com/ygokazukiThirdly- Had a listen to your other tracks and one suggest you don't pitch correct the vox- it sounds naff and you really can't fool anyone- If you don't get it right first time just do it again. Pitch correction to me seems a lazy way of production- I'm not the greatest singer but I'll keep going until I hit the right notes.lol I pitch corrected Sedated but that's it, none of the other tracks had any affects other than compressors and reverb, I swear on my life. O.oI'll have a listen to the parady when you get the chance to put it up!As it is now. :)Also I'd take that Whale Solo off if I were you- Keep it for yourself- It's probably funny to you but it's just going to put people off the rest of your music!Good point. Done, thanks.