First Theme of My Musical

[Hadji]

Right. So I'm writing a musical. This is the first song from it that I've written. I had to sing it myself, so it isn't perfect, but it's good quality.

http://media.putfile.com/The-Misfortunate-Ballad-of-Kid-Cult-Parts-1-and-2

[spongebath01]

Excellent.

The recording has really good dimension.

[evaworcim]

that was really good tbqh, as you said the voice was a bit off in parts but wasn't bad at all really, i thought the singing suited it really well, the only thing i can possibly think of that i didn't like was the piano part near the end, i think you could make the melody part up an octave, idk, it just seems too low for me, that's all I can think off, besides that it's a great song.