one of our new recordings/ songs

[cadencethefire]

this one's still far from finished, we've still got to put piano and vocals in the song, but the core of it is finished. Pay close attention to the end, i played around with dissonance i think it blends really well:

http://www.csun.edu/~njm35092/mp3/Cadence%20The%20Fire/Demo/New%20Mixes/VOSFUW%20FINAL%20MIX%20INCOMPLETE.mp3

all crits welcome good or bad.

hope you guys like it,

Nick of Cadence the Fire

[PietroCrespi]

A lot of people say go easy on the bass drum... but I think you should turn it up a little bit on this song.

[cadencethefire]

thanks for the input, i'll try that out and repost it...

[cadencethefire]

bitches i want more than one reply!

[Swill_Merchant]

Not my usual cup of tea, but I actually liked it. Some parts sounded fusion-isk to me. Very cool riffs. Keep it up!

[cadencethefire]

hey thanks, i tried to listen to yours but myspace is being SLOW as usual