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[Spencer]

I play bass guitar and I do it pretty well, but I have always wanted to write lyrics. Thing is all my stuff is just too simple. I don't think Im ready for the stickied tutorial at the top. I just need some advice. My problem is. I write just how I think. You can say Im a twat but I didn't think of posting this untill just now. I never thought anyone would read this but Im gonna let it out anyway. Its a poem about a girl I was with for 3 years and I had a feeling that we weren't going to last much longer. Mind this, as I said I never intended for anyone to read this so Im not trying to sound sweet or macho its just something I wrote...

Just Us

I feel us slipping,
And I know it'l be over soon.
but I still hope and pray
that we will stay together.

But I feel it
like there is nothing to stop us this time
unlike the other times
we wanted to keep trying

Well now things are clear,
were sick of trying
we were two people in love and
I guess nothing lasts forever

I want you to know.
One last thing
Please don't ever forget me.
You were the biggest part of my life
You brought out the best in me.

You saved me from myself.
And made me realize things.

I want to be with you forever.
But I want you to be happy.
I know I hold you back from things you want to do.
We don't agree with each other's ways.
But we know deep down inside, when we take away all the
stuff outside of our relation ship. We are perfect. We are
in love.

I wish there was a place,
where we could be,
Where there would be no money friends or anything.
And it was just us.
We would be in love.
We would be perfect.

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I know they don't rhyme, I wasn't intending to, and im really not good at that.

[Spencer]

ok I found a buch of poems I never knew I had. Im going to post em too. I dunno why... But I just feel like it. Just tell me why I suck.

I prayed
Please say yes
Then I heard thoes words
My Heart was yours

I took your word and believed you
You told me you would never leave me
You asked me where we would be in a year from now
And you showed me,
showed me what it was like to be loved
You held my hand and told me you would never let go

Your promises you couldn't keep
I had you, we became one
and now a part of me is missing
I hate everyday of my life
Im not me without you
Only you knew the true me,
Only you knew everything
Every story we told from before we could remember
Now its all worthless memories
Memories I wish I didn't have

I wish I would have died in your arms
that way I wouldn't have to wake up to today
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No im not depressed and, I know these poems may be really cheezie , Its just things I wrote not intending for it to be a song just trying to get some feelings out.

[TojesDolan]

One post per song.

Read the rules first, or edit your post and erase the later please. Thanks. :)

[Spencer]

Here is another I found on my computer I haven't read through it but Im sure its gay enough. Its from a while back Im just gonna post it so you guys can tell me what im doing wrong or where to start.

Saying Good Bye
To a friend I once knew
They don't exist anymore
They've become something new

I miss how close we were
How we were the only ones who understood eachother
We always thought we would grow up together

Well I guess we were right we grew up together
but I think we were both expecting so much more
I hated you sometimes, but I always knew you my best.

I miss the days when we would work together
take your ****ty car to every job.
and spend the time talking about useless stuff.

Thoes useless words ment the world to me.

I remember when we would play guitar together.
How all we wanted to do was make a band and play forever.
Listening to rhcp and playing all there stuff
Singing in the car, me sounding like **** but not careing
because it was you.


And I just wish you were still here.
we could do all the things we always wanted.
And the worse part is I can't tell that person.
Because they don't exist.