Satisfied...tell me what you think

[MacFamousKid]

Crooked smile, blemish on society.
Worth its while? Now you've made an enemy.
Sucked me dry, managed to get the best of me.
Satisfied? You've brought out the worst in me.

And everyday we fight just a little bit more, a little bit more, a little bit more
And everyday we fight just a little bit more, baby let me show you the door

Covered scars, Always hiding what you do
Count the stars, Never thought I'd be with you
I never lied, When I said I think we'll make it through
Satisfied? I've brought out the worst in you

And everyday we fight just a little bit more, a little bit more, a little bit more
And everyday we fight just a little bit more, baby let me show you the door

And here we go, here we go again
And here we go we go on and on and on

Crooked smile, blemish on society.
Worth its while? Now you've made an enemy.
Covered scars, Always hiding what you do
Count the stars, Never thought I'd be with you

And everyday we fight just a little bit more, a little bit more, a little bit more
And everyday we fight just a little bit more, baby we got something in store

And everyday we love just a little bit more, a little bit more, a little bit more
And everyday we love just a little bit more, baby we got something in store

[slpntrx5]

i liked that dude. the verses reminded me of rise against (whom i HIGHLY respect) and i loved the chorus you got going. made me think of anti-flag (another band i absolutely love). i'm not so sure about the very last verse, however:

Crooked smile, blemish on society.
Worth its while? Now you've made an enemy.
Covered scars, Always hiding what you do
Count the stars, Never thought I'd be with you

if i were you, i'd just write another verse to replace that. repetition in songs' verses tends to bug me.

8/10

[MacFamousKid]

Haha, thanks dude, yeah I'm not too fond of that last verse either, I'm just too lazy to write another one, and it's hard cuz I can't remember what I was thinking about when I wrote this, haha

[TojesDolan]

Extremely repetitive, but good enough for a song.

Tat should stick in someone's mind forever and ever..