Barrel Of Monkeys

[StoneTemplePilot]

"Can't you see her there,
Shes standing in the corner,
My house was broken into,
COulsnt be any colder,
How old must you be?
how old must you be?
How old must you be?
How old must you be to be accepted now?

She lives on the streets
She has to fend for herself,
She lives in a dumpster,
She lives like an animal,
How old must you be?
how old must you be?
How old must you be?
How old must you be to be accepted now?

You take a risk in life,
You take a risk in time,
feeling with now feelings,
You mind cant be broken
How old must you be?
how old must you be?
How old must you be?
How old must you be to be accepted now?"

Tell me what you think. I wrote it about these chicks who seduced me and my friend at my house and stole a bunch of money and CD's from my house.

[Octavius]

I think its cool. I'm guessing its going to be set to some kind of punk riff with the 'How old must you be?' part shouted by the whole band.
Could be an anthem :D

[drumass04]

This is ridiculously catchy!

Nothing spectacular, but catchy all the same.

To be quite honest, the repetition annoyed the hell out of me. But the other parts I really quite enjoyed. It flows well, and sounds good.

I can hear it to some kind of pop-punk tune, one of those things thatis stuck in your mind for days on end!

Timmy

If you have the time for a quick comment on my latest it's on the front page 'An Epic Tale: Chapter One'

[StoneTemplePilot]

Yea, Its not really an anthem of sorts. It has guns N' roses type riffs in it. Its not really punk sounding. And it has a lot of soloing and stuff in it. Its split up pretty well. But yea, thanx for the comments.