Thoughts Alone

[kidthatplaysguitar91]

Hey heres a song i wrote in like 10 minutes.
Might add some more later but tell me what you think.


Understand what i've been told.
For a while i was getting cold.
Save myself from help of you.
I still dont know what I can do.

Time for me to experience,
A different type of meaning.
Time for me to find,
A new type of feeling.

Another year come and passed.
Finally I got hit and crashed.
Stranded away, thoughts alone.
Everything came together on its own.

Time for me to experience,
A different type of meaning.
Time for me to find,
A new type of feeling.

[DeadReligion]

If it only took you ten minutes, it's not worth a critique. The rhyming is terribly annoying.

Another year come and passed.
Finally I got hit and crashed.
Stranded away, thoughts alone.
Everything came together on its own.
^ The only salvagable part...maybe.

[kidthatplaysguitar91]

Its funny how what one site forum says is completely different from what another site forum says. haha