[Acoustic Song!] A new acoustic song with my crappy vocals. Please crit!!

[Kirk's Puppet]

It's entitled Against The Norm.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=556252

Please crit. It wasn't supposed to be a song, but then I liked the chord progression. The interlude's cheesy, but I love it. My vocals aren't good at all, I know.

If you wanna hear my metal stuff, listen to Mercurial Defiance and Negative Melisma.

Thanks.

[s e p h]

not bad, could be built up.

~S~

http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=491685

[CantBuyAThrill]

If you practice your vocals, you'll be able to write better melodies and sound better along with it- therefore making you an all around better songwriter/performer.

A good effort all the same though.