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AndNico
09-11-2006, 07:54 PM
It all fits into the song.

No title yet...let me know what you think
i'll return the favor

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You only got a few years left on the planet
Before ya rot away
They are comin' to get rid of this Desease
-The Human Race
When they come they'll cut a deal with the devil-
You'll bolong to them
I was there when the aliens took us
Listen what they said

You're Ours! You're Ours! Do what we say
Or you'll end up dead
You're Ours!You're Ours! Listen and Obey
Or we'll have your head

Most of us were driven to the underground-
There we lived our way
But supplys started to run low
We knew we couldn't stay
We also knew that we couldn't Surface
or we'd be enslaved.
So we came up with a time machine
Just to get away (*OR* That's how i'm here today)

-Fast Part-

Death and Destruction! Awaits your arrival, as soon as they arrive.
Board up your windows! and lock up your doors- If you wanna survive
(x2)

But then again, i guess it doesn't matter-It'll end the same
If you changed it, i'd be non existant-Wouldn't stand today
So i guess that this is just a warning - that the end is near
So might as well go pick up a shovel, And start diggin' here

You're Ours! You're Ours! Do what we say
Or you'll end up dead
You're Ours!You're Ours! Listen and Obey
Or we'll have your head
Death and Destruction! Awaits your arrival, as soon as they arrive.
Board up your windows! and lock up your doors- If you wanna survive



That's it...tell me what you think
cheers

AndNico
09-13-2006, 07:40 PM
Bump?

DeadReligion
09-14-2006, 03:22 AM
Your misspelling of belong as "bolong" is classic. The only thing I hate is the chorus, but I'm predisposed to hate choruses...then again, if it was more creative it'd be better. The verses are quite nice.

AndNico
09-14-2006, 09:44 AM
i always manage to spell something wrong....even if i know how to spell it hah
we'll get the song up here eventually so people can hear it

DeadReligion
09-15-2006, 04:42 PM
Who's taking over for Austin?

AndNico
09-19-2006, 12:32 AM
Uh, my brother dave on guitar...and Austin for vocals


Ironic, eh?