Listen to my new song!

[groomits]

hey! it would be very appreciated that you take a look at my new song called "gotta go". Its 2 minutes long, you got the time...:p

www.myspace.com/grooms2

give me your songs and I'll crit them!:smash:

[KleptoJesus]

This is some pretty interesting stuff, it reminds me of something, but I don't know what. Is it one person playing all the instruments and doing the songwriting?

The vocals are decent, but they seem sort of limited... you can make it work. I liked what you were trying with the "Awww..."'s in the background of "Gotta Go" but I think that it sounded bad for some reason, maybe the vocals were a little off or something.

Overall, it's a pretty good and interesting sound, but the recording sounds a little muddy. Anyway, keep up the good work.

Check out my song under the thread "Levi Must Die!".

Edit: P.S. I just listened to the "Victory" song, and I am definitely digging the voice talking throughout the song.... good work.

[groomits]

thanks man!

Yeah, I play guitar bass and drums, and occasionnaly kerboard. I wrote all my stuff too. And I will work on those vocals. I know I'm not a pretty good singer lol but I'll practice! thanks again for the crit!

And the voice talking in This Is Your Victory is Winston Churchill saying some old quotes.

I'll go check your sound now.

[groomits]

bump..

[PECOAE]

Everything is fantastic!

I LOVE the instrumentation in This is your Victory.

Its all so perfect.

The problems are with "Gotta Go", just because you're not singing in key.

And in "Cash", there are some guitar problems, but I guess you know and it's just rough.

Check "My Stuff Again", for my stuff.

[Mossik]

I love it
All of it was great

[groomits]

Thanks men.

I know I'm not singing very well, but I'll practice and practice....

and btw, bump again:smash: