a few songs, criticism greatly appreciated

[robman304]

Hey guys,

This is my purevolume site. I'm in the thought stage before going into a really serious studio and I could use some criticism on my songs. I would really appreciate any feedback. Thanks

www.purevolume.com/robmartin

sorry there's a very strange picture of a friend of mine on the homepage...

[robman304]

pretty please

[KleptoJesus]

I'm listening to Sun Valley right now.

The recording quality is pretty darn good, your voice is solid, and the musicianship is nice. It all sounds very professional and smooth.

However, the whole song seems to kind of go in one ear and out the other for me. Maybe with more listens I could appreciate it more, I'm not sure. Perhaps my inability to get into the song lies in the fact that this isn't my type of music.

It sounds like you have a bright future in the genre though.

Check out my recent song on the forum "Levi Must Die", Thanks.