First song... Need Feedback Please!

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[KleptoJesus]

This is a really good song. It is interesting and has a very different sound to it. I don't have any suggestions to improve it. How did you get that crazy effect on the vocals in the last half?

I like how short the song is, I've listened to it three times now... and it hasn't gotten old yet. Anyway, keep up the good work, this is good and interesting stuff.

Check out my song under the thread, "Levi Must Die!"

BTW, sometimes the only way you can get somebody to critique your song is to critique their's first.

[_R2D2_]

not my type of music. with that said it was kind of catchy.

[PECOAE]

I really like.

It has indie cred - sounds kinda like Stereolab.

I love the melody.

Check out "My Stuff Again".

[Dr Nihil]

I've been browsing these pages for a while now. This is the best stuff I've heard so far. I generally listen to...heavier music, but I can always recognize greatness when I hear it. =D

You going to be posting anymore music? People usually get discouraged from an online music "career" when their page doesn't see 1,000,000 views in the first few days like they think it should. Hope you keep at it, though, 'cause I like what I'm hearin'.

[fifty6vette]

The first song is good. I really like the chorus with the overdriven vocals. It seems like things fall a bit out of time when the heavy guitar comes in at the end, though....thats my only criticism.

The second song really didn't do much for me....and when you compare it to the first song, which is quite good, it is especially dissapointing.

Keep at it in your lab making crazy scientific beats! :chug:

[Surgicalgod]

Its about being heroic, and, well, slaying a sea hag.

:lol:

I really liked the first song's melody and thought it was good.
The second song was a bit average, I suppose. I must say, though, the music clearly conveyed what's in the title and that's something not a lot of amateur musicians can achieve.

Good job :thumb: