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StillTheSame187
08-08-2006, 04:29 AM
Its pretty much about three events - Goin to shows (first 7 lines), Getting high at school (next 7 lines) Crashing your car on a highway then killing yourself because of it (last few lines)

Pick out the right shoes
I fail my arms on Rathboone Street
12 bucks sets the stage in my eyes
I think i hear some screaming
what the **** do i know?
its this place if you open your eyes
a tankard of life for a buck 99
i finally found your shoes
i go to school off public street
a few bucks you can find Jesus Christ
I hear God calling me
What the **** should i know
Feeling drowsy i close my eyes
crashed my van on i95
Morphene sets a funny mood
i can faintly process
words like torn up legiment, might be out of it.
Time for a new type of scene
in a wheelchair guzzling down listerine


i came up with it in lke 20 minutes and wrote what came to mind.
can anyone help me with a name?

bryce88
08-08-2006, 02:59 PM
i think its not that bad. need some improvement, but you got a good idea with the money things. keep at it and it has potential for a song.

Madmatt
08-08-2006, 03:44 PM
like it just add a chorus or somethin and a title
somethin li life after weedor somethin