Dirty

[Agrim]

Disguised as art
Irrelevance indeed
Sweeter than water
Sicker than sin
Your tits heave
With every heavy breathe
Your eyes piercing
Like strangers never met
And as I imagine
Such sicker fantasies
You act automatically
To astonishing reverie
Kiss my gaping mouth
Calm my budding heat
Take me home woman
With acts so obscene
Appease me tonight
With dirty disheveled things

[Madmatt]

like it great imaginey i would give it a 8/10

[Agrim]

bumpity bump

[Steerpike]

Has kind of a spoken poetry vibe to it. Reminds me a little of Mezmerize by Celtic Frost.

I don't really know what else to tell you, though. What were you planning on putting this to?

And incidentally, I'd appreciate if you would give my latest work a once-over.
http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=486502