"The Other Side of Sanity"

[usuck]

"The Other Side of Sanity"

Chorus:
I'm laughing for no reason
and I can't stop
laughing so hard
I'm crying rivers
I'm a lunatic
a laughing madman
but I'm not a man
I am a woman
so that's
I'm a laughing madwoman
what caused this?
there is no cause
or is it only hidden?
I think I've finally cracked
I'm on the other side of sanity now
and actually, I think I like it here

Verse 1:
I'm a laughing maniac
can you tell me why?
I'm laughing so hard
tears steam down my face
and I can't get any oxygen
and despite what you might think
the other side of sanity is not so bad after all

Chorus

Verse 2:
laughing maniacally
now I'm not laughing at all
wipe the tears from my face
what the hell was just happening?
what the **** is wrong with me?
it's insanity
I'm on the other side of sanity now

Chorus

[takes2tokill]

hm.
so the only idea behind this whole thing is "laughing maniacly"?
also, i think the word laughing was used to many times. kinda repetitive to me.

[Mars The Mental]

hm.
so the only idea behind this whole thing is "laughing maniacly"?
also, i think the word laughing was used to many times. kinda repetitive to me.

ditto. there's not much creativity.

[sportsfan4427]

I'm laughing for no reason
and I can't stop
laughing so hard
I'm crying rivers
I'm a lunatic
a laughing madman
but I'm not a man
I am a woman
so that's
I'm a laughing madwoman
what caused this?
there is no cause
or is it only hidden?
I think I've finally cracked
I'm on the other side of sanity now
and actually, I think I like it here

this is not very good. it's too bad this is a chorus cause that means it'd be played more than once. umm on the bright side the last too line are decent(not good but decent) and that the title line

I'm a laughing maniac
can you tell me why?
I'm laughing so hard
tears steam down my face
and I can't get any oxygen
and despite what you might think
the other side of sanity is not so bad after all

umm no...you might wanna just scrap this part

Alright the next ones the same as the rest of this song you have an orginal idea maybe add some stuff and get rid of laughing cause it's used so god damn much

Could you give mine a look it's call Is this Cliche you'll see it...got my name under it too haha