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[morgan_dorffer]

Emotions stain
Love's a rough game
It takes two to play
And see it to the end

Just to let you know
I care for you more
Than I could ever say
Take my word
I don't mean to hide
But it scares me all the time
What the future brings
Where we will lead

I'm not the same
Since we became
It's not like me
To spill it all out

If we should part
You'll remain in my heart
I won't forget
All the times we spent

Just to let you know
I care for you more
Than I could ever say
Take my word
I don't mean to hide
But it scares me all the time
What the future brings
Where we will lead

Though you're far away
You will stay
In my mind
All of the time

I want you to know
I love you more
Than I could ever say


The melody is fairly slow and it's acoustic. I appreciate any crit and I'll crit back to you.

-ang

[usuck]

A lot of the rhymes are very common. The only thing I can really say you might want to do is to change some of the words. They're all very simple. Just find a thesaurus and use some synonyms. I think it's a really sweet song, and it probably sounds really good with the music. 7/10.