"A Raging Punk and a Tortured Ally"

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"A Raging Punk and a Tortured Ally"

Chorus:
a road going nowhere,
a tortured soul.
she's living in a paradise
a road that ends in disaster,
a raging punk.
he's dougting this thing,
hating this thing that's just begun
this thing that exists only in their minds
paired with paranoia, magnified by paranoia

Verse 1:
they are trapped together in this hell
trying desperately to find a way out
there's got to be a way
does one exist?
they may never know

Chorus

Verse 2:
they are all alone in this world together
escaping this thing,
yet running toward it
stunbling blindly along the way
helping only, relying on only each other
allied in this quest, this fight
but archenemies by nature

Chorus

Verse 3:
a raging punk, angered by everything
a tortured ally, haunted by the past
both angered, both haunted by this thing
this thing that they are running toward and away from

Chorus

[usuck]

Aw, come on! Someone crit this. Even if it is horrible. This is the second time I've posted it and no one will crit it. Why is that?