A new tune up..

[JeffP1717]

I feel like this is one of my strongest songs that will be on the album.. check it out please, I'd love some feedback. My buddy Steve on vocals in the first half, me on vocals the second half. Anyway, here it is, the song is "Night":

http://www.myspace.com/jeffpearsonband :thumb:

[GG_gott]

This is not bad. I like your style. Only thing I personally would do is put some kind of melodic solo somewere during the halfway point in your song. That way I think the transition between the two lead singers would be better.
Obviously you should make your own mind up as this is your song but listen to a song by System of a down called Roulette.
I know the style of the song is not the same but a similar type solo would fit your song a treat. Either way, I liked your song.

[JeffP1717]

I can accept "not bad"! Thanks for the feedback. I'm not gonna lie, I prefer the structure the way it is right now, but I'll think about it. It just seems to flow better, I don't know what it is. Thanks again! :chug:

[JeffP1717]

I should have another one up by the end of the week..

[DillingerEscp]

Not my cup of tea. But very well done ! one of the few myspace bands where the singer is talented/stays in key. recording is good !

I just love death metal... but regardless, very well done sirs.

[Phill]

I like it, As GG said it could do with a bit of a melodic solo to keep the song flowing between the transition of singers. But keep up the good work.

[JeffP1717]

I guess there's a lot more to work on then I originally thought, but that's no big deal. I appreciate the honesty from all! :thumb:

[JeffP1717]

Bump... :rolleyes: