Prigona

[I_was_god]

Check out my original for my band, its called opener :thumb:
www.putfile.com/Heresy_666

[-:Vincent:-]

Opener: The beginning sounded alright, but that continous background noise got a bit annoying after a while. About 35sec into the song you need to put in some kind of transition, it doesn't flow into it very well. The guitar for the rest of the song was nice, but a bit repetitive, I would recommend changing it up a some, then repeating previous parts. The one thing that I really didn't like about it was the drums, they just repeated over and over until they started using double bass. Try adding in some fills at parts (like transitions) to make it seem more interesting or maybe a tom beat, just something other than the standard hi-hat, bass, snare beat. I really think you should add some vocals to it (some screaming would sound nice with this song), but then again, if the vocals ruin it I would just keep it as instrumental. Overall it wasn't that bad, I enjoyed listening to it.

[-:Vincent:-]

Hmm...is all the other stuff in that link your bands too? Cause some of it is sounding pretty good.

[I_was_god]

thanks man!