Bands Newest Recording.

[Danb1215]

www.myspace.com/admorata

Check out the song final apology, the others werent done to the same quality.
I personally play keys which is only eveident in this song at the very end with the strings. Crits needed. Thanks guys.

[Kujo]

Final Apology- The thing that stands out the most to me is tempo. You guys have trouble staying together. I can't really hear the drums much except for the cymbal, which is going a different tempo than the rest of the group. It seems like the drums are lagging behind and eveyone else is rushing. I recommend practicing with a metronome. Also, the part with the keyboard and strings is very nice and pretty, but the riff after that seems unnecessary and kind of ruins the effect.

Keep up the good work :thumb:

[-:Vincent:-]

Final Apology: Well, the recording quality was poor. I can barley hear the drums and the vocals dominate over most everything else. Everything seems kind of out of tempo especially some of the vocal parts. The lyrics aren't very interesting for me, but at least it is sung well. The keyboard part at the ending would have to have been my favorite part of the song, although it did seem a bit out of place (thats not necessarliy a bad thing). With some more practice and a better recording I'm sure it would be sounding good.

[Danb1215]

thanks for the crits, we redid that recording several times because the drums were, off he was either speeding up or slowing down, so we knew thatd be a problem. hopefully we'll fix that song and ill post a video of our next live show.