first songs i made

[magaroth]

hey all!
I just started recording and writing my own stuff, i made 3 songs and i would like some pointers, there are a few mistakes in it. i'm trying to find a band but i cant sing very well hehe :) I'm trying to find someone who can sing and maybe do something like this in band formation. but till that timecomes ill have to try on my own.

3 songs on this site:
http://www.purevolume.com/soulstreaking

[Moss]

Hey.
I think your songwriting is really cool. Just listened to "Presence" and loved it. The bass has a nice tone, but sometimes the string noise is intrusive and the intonation is off for the high notes so it sounds a little out of tune in places.
Ok, listened to "Forever Inside" and "The Better Life" and they are great, too. I think you need to gain a bit more confidence in your vocals to make the songs really come alive. You have a good voice, learn how to make the most of it. It might help to sing along to loud monitors instead of headphones to build your vocal volume and confidence.
Great stuff mate. There's some neat ideas there.