My Solo work

[My Chemical Wha?]

I recently made this song and my friends really liked it so i wondered what you guys would think

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Feedback is appreciated

[My Chemical Wha?]

bump

no comments? lol

[Violent_Bill]

Wow, just listened to the song "High School Romance" and I was impressed, very well played and mixed. Definatly will listen to some more later, keep it up!

[La Revolucion]

I'm listening to High School Romance right now. Everything sounds like it was recorded at different tempos, and there's no real base to the song. Some bongos or conga drums in the background would sound good. The electric part jumps out of nowhere, maybe a somewhat slower transition would be better. Of course vocals would make this better, but that's not something you can easily remedy.

The song itself was alright, the structure seemed just like quite verse loud chorus quiet verse again, which can be very effective when done right, but all the random out of time guitar noodling kind of ruined that. I'll listen to more of your stuff eventually.

[King of Diamonds]

yea high school romance was nice keep it up