ok..again

[guitar_is_life1992]

hey everyone :wave: im the dude that had writers block but i think i got something tho here it is



clouds darken the sky
its such a lonely night
shadows outside my widonw
waiting to strike
its a cold lonely night
lighting flashes in the air
thuder crashes threw the sky
its such a quiet empy night
a man darkened in the shadows
watches so quiet;y
where do we stand in the world ever dark and lonely
night of our lives every sad scence



this is a small sample plz rate it 1-5

[sandsoftime]

such a lonely day and it's mine...the most lonelyest day of my li....fe
such a lonely day should be banned it's a day that i can't sta...nd
the most lonelyest day of my li...fe
the most lonelyest day of my li...fe

it reminds me of that
could be a compliment
could be an insult
you decide

there are a few good stanzas and a few bad ones
but there really isn't much here so it is obviously not done
so you have time to fix it...get to it

[guitar_is_life1992]

alright ill do that and I ****ing love that song